Revision for exam

G321-
There was a lack of communication and team work which caused our final opening 2 minutes to be not up to a high standard and the final one to be lost. For G321 our fade to blacks lasted too long which lost the tension that could have been built upon. We also tried to show the audience too much of the footage which meant the camera angles were awful.


When cutting to the man outside the window the cut to closer of his face was too sharp and did not flow.

Another part of G321 which I felt was not to a high enough standard was it all lo0oked too staged, it did not look like a film because the actors did not feel as if they were trying to play the characters but as if they were just rushing it.


The shot of the man following charlotte in the opening 2 minutes would have been effective but the characters both looked at the camera which ruined the look of charlotte not knowing. Charlotte also looks round to her side at the end but does not react to the man which is unrealistic as she is meant to not know who he is.


For G321 we wanted to make it realistic by adding in titles at the end, however it went too fast so the effect was lost.






G324- Our G324 was of a much higher standard than my G321 which I did with a different group.
Due to the fact that we took a lot longer with each scene to guarantee that we captured the feelings and connected the characters and audience as one it already was of a better standard than G321.


For G324 we went to Ashtead common which is where we filmed the part of them throwing the stones.
This was an amazing scene due to the high quality from the camera. But also the fact that we took multiple shots until we were pleased with the shot. We took it from different angles because we wanted to capture the characters innocence through the shot.


Our production titles at the end are effective because they are all in one but stand out when a name is shown which means they are not over loaded with information.